Thursday, February 11, 2010

A Letter About My Job Like A Dentist Ok, Improved Cover Letter Taking Your Advice On Board. What Do You Think?

Ok, Improved cover letter taking your advice on board. What do you think? - a letter about my job like a dentist

Dear Mr X

I am looking for an opportunity to experience working in the field of dentistry for the month of September. I am currently a student at the University of Reading xxx Molecular Biology and enter my fourth year in October. I have just one years of investment in the research center in London, where I had the opportunity to improve my skills and experience of university research.

Now I want to see how science is used in dentistry, and to see the dentist routine work must be done to deepen my knowledge and to make an informed decision on my career. And observe the work performed on the patient, I hope to contribute to the tasks of this surgery, could provide additional support in any way I am.

Thanks for the inclusion orand time to consider my request to you, I put my CV and if there is something else, I want to know, please do not hesitate to contact us.
Thank you,
Best regards
me

.. the best style? I hope so!

2 comments:

vvxxzzvv said...

I have not seen the original version, so do not know what kind of criticism that he has. My experience is struggling with my cover letters and resumes for specific skills, working mainly on his CV will be kept, if you have any problems with redundancy. Your letter must be more than an introduction of yourself and what you can to get the job you want to get.
This is one of my letters, do not do well, because we are working in very different areas, but it does not specify what I am trying to say, and I was told by many employers and teachers, in a letter of introduction Large:


Dear Editor,
I would like to express my interest in the design of front position is currently available.
I'm Janrgetic solve a big problem employees, the ability and you can keep the productivity, if the crisis is a crisis is expected levels.

Research presentation, I am proud of my work and enjoy working with all aspects of each project.
Juggling multiple projects simultaneously, compliance with deadlines and organizational tasks, while maintaining that positive attitude is always important, and the creative skills that you can count on me.

Even when a design student at the University of XXX, I had the opportunity to share my artistic design skills result of the many locations. The advertising and illustration were my favorites. As an employee, I am a versatile go-getter with lots of creative ideas.

Your professional attitude, friendly nature, excellent design skills, equipment, massive premiumSkills and the ability to solve problems, is an excellent addition to your team. Thank you.
Best regards,
me

SexyTroj... said...

Make the following change to:

"Currently I am a student studying molecular biology and XXX enters my fourth year in October."

In addition, the Department of Education to take their university.

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